Introducing a piece of my fast writings...

I decided to select this fast write, because it was supposed to be the beginning of a creative and fun era. It's the first page of a story which I planned to add a new page every fast writing. I did it a few times, so that my "story" covers now about 10 pages. But it's getting boring so I decided o take a break, maybe forever :)

I apologize for the probably bad grammar and surely poor vocabulary, because I didn't look up any word... not to mention my punctuation :P (it doesn't even have a title...)

Nameless Story, so far

I woke up in a room I don't know. "Where am I?" was my first thought. I looked around. I didn't see much, it was very dark and there was just a hole, tiny hole where light could go in. I found a flash light at my belt and turned it on. "What the heck?" shit through my brain. "What happened here?". There were many dead bodies around me. Then I analyzed the room; it seemed like a control room of a ship, plane o starship. There were many broken screens, some flashed on and off. I tried to remember what happened. It was not succesful. I looked clearly at the corpses. No one had wounds from bullets or something else. The most had big black and blue points, often almost a ful part of the body like a full arm or leg. Suddenly my left arm hurt immensely. "Why so suddenly?". I rolled up my jacket and saw that I have also a black and blue arm. "The adrenaline doesn't seem working anymore. Shit!". With the flashlight I found a crushed door. It seemed impossible to open it without tools. At the other end of the room was another door. It haven't been crushed, it was possible to open it. The next room was kinda like a hangar. Many helicopter wracks I could see. And light. Much light. I looked through the missing wall ad was shocked; a big burning city, high towers and huge ruins. As I walked out of the hole, I could smell the ash and blood in the air...

That was the first page of the story. Constructive comments would be fine, thank you guys :)
Also enjoy the other blogs of our Creative Writing Community which you can find on the mother blog.

Mobile posting test :)

Gratitude

Gratitude is something that veryone should show every day. it can make your life easier and more harmonic. People like it to hear a "thank you" after done work. If you don't say that, people may misunderstand and think your not ok with their work and are sad. But a clear and loud "thank you" is not misunderstandable. Try it out. Think about it! What would you prefer? :D

Blog Reviews

Hey guys, our recent assignment is about stalking others blogs, leave a comment and write a short review :D
Well, then here we go:

Ramblings of Meh by PreytorFenix:

Well, yeah, the author is a good writer, I actually like the blog's design and he uses a budding, creative writing style I like as well :D
and btw: can you find the ponies? :P

Pensamientos by Pensamientos :P

The title is spanish and means "the thinking" or "the thought" (in plural, hope it's correct). In the second post the author writes about apologizing for a duck it killed with its car. I think this is a good beginning and fits the title perfectly. I am looking forward for the posts in the future. What may come?

Carpe Diem by olemgjerd:
I will not say you what the title means. The author writes it on its blog and you can go and look for it. You should do, because the blog is worth enough to take a closer look and admire that creative writing style. Don't believe me? Then go on and click on the link :P

Additional note for the teacher:
I left a comment on the, to the time of writing this post, most current post :D I hope I've done the assignment correctly :)

How I feel right now :)

Hey folks, there is actually no picture that describes better how I feel right now than the following one ;) How do you feel?

Remember (the fallen)

I chose that poem, because I think it's something that everyone should remember, doesn't matter which country he or she comes from. Every country has Founding Fathers or people who fought for living the way you do today :)

to remember the fallen
is not to remember how they fell
but to remember why and for what

to remember the fallen
is not only to remember their actions
but to remember the dream for which they fought

to remember the fallen
is not to remember how they fought
but to remember who they fought for

to remember the fallen
is to remember their reason
to remember their dreams
and to remember those they fought to save

to remember the fallen
we continue their fight
we carry their dreams
and we finish what they start


by Analissa Range
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/to-remember-the-fallen/

First

Hello Everyone and welcome to my blog. This blog was created for the Creative Writing class in my school, so i have to wait for an assignment that belongs to this blog.

What will follow? I don't know. May God Know :)