I apologize for the probably bad grammar and surely poor vocabulary, because I didn't look up any word... not to mention my punctuation :P (it doesn't even have a title...)
Nameless Story, so far
I woke up in a room I don't know. "Where am I?" was my first thought. I looked around. I didn't see much, it was very dark and there was just a hole, tiny hole where light could go in. I found a flash light at my belt and turned it on. "What the heck?" shit through my brain. "What happened here?". There were many dead bodies around me. Then I analyzed the room; it seemed like a control room of a ship, plane o starship. There were many broken screens, some flashed on and off. I tried to remember what happened. It was not succesful. I looked clearly at the corpses. No one had wounds from bullets or something else. The most had big black and blue points, often almost a ful part of the body like a full arm or leg. Suddenly my left arm hurt immensely. "Why so suddenly?". I rolled up my jacket and saw that I have also a black and blue arm. "The adrenaline doesn't seem working anymore. Shit!". With the flashlight I found a crushed door. It seemed impossible to open it without tools. At the other end of the room was another door. It haven't been crushed, it was possible to open it. The next room was kinda like a hangar. Many helicopter wracks I could see. And light. Much light. I looked through the missing wall ad was shocked; a big burning city, high towers and huge ruins. As I walked out of the hole, I could smell the ash and blood in the air...
That was the first page of the story. Constructive comments would be fine, thank you guys :)
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